General Writing Notes

Wisdom

ABC Always be closing

Words spoken are important

Thinking has different roads, different ends

Motion creates emotion

Get people to say "yes" even if it is rhetorical

Coaching people

Have your rebuttals ready

Akha Sales book

The highest percentage of wins.

The best move

The economy of energy

Writing Style Notes

is, are, was, were, have, has, had

DON’T USE

The wind blows. Not the wind is blowing. Closer up this way.

The bad apples. Not there were three bad apples.

The wind blew, not was blowing.

I could not find the apples. Not I could not find where the apples are, were, had been.

Methods

What do you want to say?

What do you want to say about what you haven't done yet, in other words, hope.

What is the story line if any, is it easy to read?

New experience, reflection, writing

Themes of this book

Ideas of this story

Missing Content

Missing angles

Adding, clarifying, expanding, existing book needs transitions

Source mining, pics etc

How the Akha have managed to survive at all

Personal stories

Themes

Themes (nouns): The process of human behavior and our reflections on that behavior.

They are mostly human universal.

What makes the lives of groups of people different?

A. We can aspire

B. Some people don’t get the opportunity to aspire as often due to oppressed environment.

C. Some places it is so dark that people don’t dare to hope.

Themes Via......

(includes all of life)

Nouns

Verbs

Events

Reflection: History, stories, songs, sculpture, painting, music, creation of something.

Narator

Plot

Theme

Tone

Setting

Character(s)

Symbols

Difficult situations in their lives, like at hospitals without truth and without resources.

Theme names

Humor, jokes

Abandonment

Sickness

Love

Joy

Despair

Oppression

War

Slavery

Hunger

Poverty

Need

Greed

Belief

Betrayal

Feelings

Land

Identity

Hope

Service

Devotion

Secrecy

Family

Grandfather, mother, father, children

Nouns

Verbs

Events

Editing:

To say it more clearly.